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Glory Bound (Free verse) by kazeaki

Keep your head held high, love, for the world is hued in violet shades. Let them say you are of nothing made! For glory finds his victims from grime to velvet sheets. Someday you will meet Gaea. Your feet will kiss the bottom sea and your eyes shine with the stars.

dancin_n_da_moonlite 4-Apr-05/9:21 AM
"let them say you are of nothing made".....the whole inverting words to make things rhymes just doesnt sound good..




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