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Into My World (Acrostic) by sliver

Rosebuds seem pale in your presence even when wet with my tears no such beauty before or since ever came close-that's clear even Snow White would pale in your mirror. Beautiful down to the core light in the darkest night uncharted regions waiting to be explored everything about you feels right Emotions swell when you're near yearning to be unfurled everyone else seems to disappear since you've come into my world.

dancin_n_da_moonlite 2-Apr-05/11:11 AM
this is so beautiful

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