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Thinking (Free verse) by dancin_n_da_moonlite

Sometimes I wonder if people ever think anymore, if people ever think at all. Or if they just do whatever seems right at the moment, regardless of whether or not it actually is. Sometimes I wonder if anyone is planning for the future. It wont take care of itself, you know. Someone must tend to it. Sometimes I wonder if anybody is thinking.

Dan garcia-Black 16-Mar-05/8:22 AM
You are. Maybe that will be enough. If I were writing this one I would have screwed it up at the end with some trite comment about someone passing the joint or bottle over to me. Good thing you wrote it instead.




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