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Waiting For You To Call (vulgar language) (Free verse) by PK

I thought that I was special I thought that we were true I thought that I meant something But now I'm just so fucking blue You fucking said That you would call You fucking made Me feel so small You're sitting now Laughing so fucking proud While i'm sitting here Waiting so fucking loud I scream from within From the pain you cause I hide from without From the love I've aloud

horus8 29-Aug-02/9:49 PM
d.a's got a point i say replace the word "that" with cunt, the term "I" with "the shank of maggotry" and the with "fish monger". great. thanks. may a rock from outer space fix your problems. and mine too. soon




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