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22nd Anniversary (Free verse) by Frass

May 8th, a beautiful day For a radiantly beautiful woman like you To breathe in the sweetly scented Blue Ridge air Where you are Too far from here Your star rises amid the herbs and flowers As you admire the bowers along your way Play at life with intensity Lay aside bitter roots and brambles Stay by your own pure inner voice of asurety Surely, your blooming is a loving thing Bathe in langorous fern goddess ablution Your pangs and pains are past Your vibrant solution Is living

Bachus 29-Aug-02/8:01 PM
this smells like another father of the bride sequal...this time...in.. norfolk..so positive and uplifting...awe...and it makes you think too...alot...lots of braincells are up there right now...in my huge mind just...wow..smelling flowers, and solutions..and i don't even remember what i was mad about...oh yes...here it comes...the joyful glee...la.la.la.laaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.LAaaaaa la. lo.la.lo. sing with me...follow the bouncing flower sniffer. you'll feel better trust me...smile children cuz things are just so perfect and special these days...yeah..i feel it alright...lots of spears shaking around here. i'm joylouse.




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