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Decay (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Castle gate rusts as it guards the womb. Rusty Hull-ed ship carries disease Rusty shopping cart beggar on his knees Rusting old car road trippin' road trippin' Rusty old car clutch is a slippin' Rust Rust Rust Quiet rust The dollar bill chatters in god we trust The steeple of the church drips its' rusting chips The rusty Iron gate Guards the entrance to the tomb.

dancin_n_da_moonlite 5-Mar-05/11:27 AM
i absolutely love this! i honestly have no idea why but i sense a brilliance in it! - 10 -




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