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black dog (Free verse) by wilco

Coarse hair of black and brown Confiding in the lamplights glow. Home was somewhere long ago; Remembrance coming loosely. Rain and cold they slow the blood and make for awful company. Oil slick and chasing shadows; befuddled by the rainbows. Red on black and silent still, She never saw it coming.

Dan garcia-Black 21-Jan-05/8:44 AM
Of course it sounds like it's about doggie roadkill but even if it isn't...-10- Good.




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