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Half a dozen (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

I wrote a love song on every petal On every one of your pink roses If you turn them clockwise you will see Instead you turned against the march of time Making nonsense outta all my lines So the meaning is lost, and becomes terrible prose...

wilco 20-Jan-05/5:30 PM
I think it's pretty good, but I'd use out of instead of outta.




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