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Rain (Free verse) by dancin_n_da_moonlite

"Do you want to go outside Katie?" "But it's raining, Davey." "But do you want to go outside Katie?" "Okay Davey." "Do you feel the rain Katie?" "Why wouldn't I Davey? " "But do you feel the rain Katie?" "Not really, Davey." "Do you know why it rains Katie?' "Well they taught us in science Davey." "But do you know why it rains Katie?" "I guess not, Davey." "Do you want to stay out here forever, Katie?" "I have things to do, Davey." "But do you want to stay out here forever Katie?" "Yes, I really do, Davey."

dancin_n_da_moonlite 16-Jan-05/11:12 AM
one part: thanx
one part: ummmmmmm okay then.......?

-mega




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