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Rain (Free verse) by dancin_n_da_moonlite

"Do you want to go outside Katie?" "But it's raining, Davey." "But do you want to go outside Katie?" "Okay Davey." "Do you feel the rain Katie?" "Why wouldn't I Davey? " "But do you feel the rain Katie?" "Not really, Davey." "Do you know why it rains Katie?' "Well they taught us in science Davey." "But do you know why it rains Katie?" "I guess not, Davey." "Do you want to stay out here forever, Katie?" "I have things to do, Davey." "But do you want to stay out here forever Katie?" "Yes, I really do, Davey."

Blindpoetry 15-Jan-05/8:05 PM
lol

I'm fourteen. Been here, sending crappy poetry as I write them, since 2003. I have way more. But just the sight of them will sting the most unpenetrable eyes.

I've gotten my share of mean people here. eh. It's what Poemranker is made of. *cough*Dark Angle*cough*
I'm not making this into a sorry fest.

But I wasn't trying to be mean. either.




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