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Rain (Free verse) by dancin_n_da_moonlite

"Do you want to go outside Katie?" "But it's raining, Davey." "But do you want to go outside Katie?" "Okay Davey." "Do you feel the rain Katie?" "Why wouldn't I Davey? " "But do you feel the rain Katie?" "Not really, Davey." "Do you know why it rains Katie?' "Well they taught us in science Davey." "But do you know why it rains Katie?" "I guess not, Davey." "Do you want to stay out here forever, Katie?" "I have things to do, Davey." "But do you want to stay out here forever Katie?" "Yes, I really do, Davey."

dancin_n_da_moonlite 15-Jan-05/7:54 PM
btw.......i'm a fucking teenager too.........and im sorry if i sounded pissy......im in a bad mood.......i responded to your poem however.....before i even read any of your comments.................youve written alot of poetry............how old r u anyway (and just so you know.........i wrote this like 3 months ago.....i just am sending my stuff........in order......so that......it will all be here.......eventually......)

-mega


p.s.--------hope i didn't come of, as a total bitch -- ya know





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