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Perfect Time of Year
(
Free verse
) by
wilco
The dead leaves falling, Swirling, Fighting over the last bit of uncovered ground. The evening air turning Colder; Perfect if not for lack of a coat. Hopeful for a new beginning. Different, If not for a lack of change.
richa
4-Nov-04/1:22 AM
Sounds nice. 'Different, if not for a lack of change' is a decent idea but wrong poem I think (there is change if dead leaves are falling).
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