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Ash (Lyric) by horus8

There is a place, I often go A burnt down house, outside of town Ring of trees, scarred and bent Laughing children, now absent Foundation left like bones for rain Nothing earned, and nothing gained Mailbox tilted to face the ground The far off bark of a Blood-hound An Ash tree, initialed, full of crows My heart, and hers, black with arrow.

zodiac 31-Oct-04/12:14 AM
re: "Seems the poem is a metaphor for something lost."

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