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Drunk and Fucked Up (Lyric) by wilco

I think you've had too much to drink. Stumbling closer to the brink. Everyone is watching now. Everyone is gathered 'round. Maybe when they turn their heads, I can take you home to bed. Shake the spiders from my mind and let it eat me up inside. Another late night serenade to all the bad choices we've made. You'll figure it all out sometime soon. I already have but I just don't care Because baby, I'm drunk and fucked up too. Somewhere somethings out of tune and the auroras coming soon. Take a walk down the dark end of the street until we both admit defeat. Smoke a last-chance cigarette, and make another stupid bet. Another desperate attempt to find another line and let it ride. Another late night serenade to all the bad choices we've made. You'll figure it all out sometime soon. I already have but I just don't care Because baby, I'm drunk and fucked up too.

RION12 25-Sep-04/3:59 PM
That was the best poem I read today and forever. You got so much talent.




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