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Solid Understanding
(
Free verse
) by
Dovina
My words splatter like grease the simplest puzzle eludes I mimic old sayings none of it true. At such an intimate moment please donât cast your eyes or change expression I fear if you do itâs immediately lost.
Jeremi B. Handrinos
6-Aug-04/12:57 AM
I hated the ending, it would do better to rhyme.
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