Replying to a comment on:

Saturn (Free verse) by Bachus

I am by fire, all that's used With no restraint I leap upon muse, and ride her bloody corpse into the Sea I am the night-fall quick like that not lit among the dark and treacherous I find my meals by the nightmare and my revenge by the mouthful, sleeping. My legs are thunder, My mind the sky. I am time, and that which is written to be forgotten by men that come and go like so many missed sunsets concealed by super-cell and twilight. I think in terms of space so vast as to not be counted, perceived, or noticed. I am that planet above the sun dancing at sunrise and splitting into the eyes of the world snake. Graphing the cosmos with pyramids and reflective pools. I will number you all, and cover you with hatred. Although, that word has no meaning for you to date Against, the ways you will burn.

Prince of Void 31-Jul-04/3:01 PM
That was a nice poem ...i like it




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001