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A Choir Boy's Spoiliation.. (Haiku) by Bachus

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Bachus 23-Aug-02/12:28 AM
listen, "old man" i'm humbled really? experimentation? i honestly havn't even begun to break into my writing mode yet...i've been to busy being horus fucking8 and raising a family by acting in movies and commercials and theatre and playing and composing music and touring with bands to pay attention until now,lol! whatever? who gives a fuck? you? why? because you're a "coservative writer" i'm lol! and sucking up the "oh you should be published if you're not already praise" fuck off.lol! i'm 28 with a girlfriend for five years and an artist struggling in the thick of it...every fucking day...i haven't worked nine to fivw since i was twenty i do what i want to do "art for lunatics with huge nothings"the flesh mesh mind fuck industry...don't give me your iowa workshop hype shit.. okay! i'm in the middle of it man! on the frontlines and raising a family as an artist so.....take your grown up shit elsewear chief joseph.. i was in the military (navy seals) and i did my share of time with "good ole boys like you" so back off or blaze guns, but don't waste my time...okay i need to write..




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