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Navy Pier (Free verse) by Doug

Lake Michigan's soft and ceaseless cobalt breakers, the dulcet breeze by the Beer Garden in such peculiar concert with your silly laugh. It blew your russet hair against my cheek, as I drank the rest of your warm Black & Tan and stared at the shimmering of your freckled shoulder, half-concerned that sweat and sun could make such splendor.

wilco 18-Jun-04/9:58 PM
Holy shit, he can leave serious comments. Don't you feel bad now, Doug.

Regarding the poem: Not bad, really.




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