poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco.

thepinkbunnyofdoom17 Jun 2004

Ah... Beautiful but this needs more of a longing tone for the dream that is California. I've never been there but my father is a sailor guy, so I've traveled alot, this has potential, but it doesn't really give me that kinda longing.