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The Ocean Prefers A Sunset (Free verse) by wilco

On the horizon, dancing waltzes with the end of the Earth, she casts the shadows of crumbling caryatids on the listless sand. I'm standing on the shoreline and hoping for an evening rain to fall. The chemicals bouncing through my mind, twist her, turn her until she becomes the entire world. She's almost gone now; and with her death, the birth of night. So, I wait for her sister to cast her warming smile; and although not as beautiful, warm my bones as I yearn to see her again.

wilco 10-Jun-04/8:53 PM
I try writing free verse or whatever else, but with this, I just picked up my guitar and puked it out. That's why it is what it is. Wasn't a whole lot of contemplation with it...almost like free-association trying to get over it. Anyway...it'll pass, as all things of this nature do. Thanks for the feedback.




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