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Lorca: Canción del Jinete (Other) by Sasha

In the blackened moon Of the horseback bandits Spurs chant out a song: "Swarthy little pony Where are you and your dead rider going?" Sturdy spurs, and strong Of the stirless bandit Who let the reins down: "Chilly little pony What a dagger-blossom! What aroma!" In the blackened moon Dusky Peak was bleeding, Bleeding from a wound. "Swarthy little pony Where are you and your dead rider going?" Then the night with spurs Kicked its sable sides and Pricked itself with stars: "Chilly little pony What a dagger-blossom! What aroma!" In the blackened moon Shrieks and screams!- Intoning Of the bonfire's horn! "Swarthy little pony Where are you and your dead rider going?"

horus8 25-May-04/9:20 PM
So why should we care, we didn't mention them, lol you did as some sort of enabling defense mechanism that enables you to not feel like a hack (which you are). There's a huge difference between rewriting a myth with a new twist, and what you've done here friend, a HUGE difference.




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