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Slayer Sucks (Free verse) by peaceseeker

behind the slayer tour buses two males and one female a drunken girlfriend moaning "hey!" I yelled and crossed the busy two lane street after I saw him hit her head on a wall "can I talk to her?" I asked he said "please, do go ahead" she quickly attached herself to my arm and I led her away past police cars on the side of the street and he followed I said "he hurts you, doesn't he?" she said "we live two hours away and I hooked him and his friends up with beer and tickets but nothing ever makes him happy." standing next to me with his fingers pointed at my belly like a gun with eyes bulging he turned his indignance on me "this ain't your business" and "you don't know what's going on" and "you just took her side" I asked her if she was safe and she said "yes" and I tried to explain to him that this is what females do for one another but I had to leave then for all the yelling and unpredictability as much as I dislike the police I wish I had led her straight to a police cruiser.

wilco 17-May-04/1:24 PM
A 10 simply for the title (and the poem's not bad either. Slayer does suck.




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