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The Plea of the Beneathednessified (New poetry scheme!) (Other) by Enkidu

May be we so close to home Be we may so hopeless alone Impounded in a cageless reality Find for me shelter for jail willing be we Tread over Handed down The filth victorious Be we ignored We the beneathednessified Speak now as a man no dog or angel Be we evoked We the reimpassionated Hoped over Handed faith The middlers humbled May be we so close to home Be we may no longer alone Impressed upon a cageless reality Find for me love for wonder willing be we

Stephen Robins 14-May-04/9:58 AM
"Speak now as a man no dog or angel" may benefit from punctuation.

Aside from that this poem is a blender full of turds.




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