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Monday night football, Tueasday? War. (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

The tip of the spear does almost sound arousing. Just not to the French. War video game? Battle sequence play station. On line Navy SEAL. Do I see hippies? Unfortunately, not quite. Kids with zits and gum. Cool! Live from Baghdad. This is better than sliced bread. Real time' shock and awe'. A snake with no head. Ghost with note pad and glasses. Prepare to defect.

SweetJuliet10 13-May-04/11:31 PM
and this is on the top 20? .... sheesh




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