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inverse square (Free verse) by ex0teric

two bodies, drifting their trajectories intersect close enough for an inverse-square relationship to develop. they pass, forever altered by their brief contact. ages come and go, their orbits, bent towards each other, intersect again. now they are closer, the cycle repeats itself; closer, closer, closer. they approach a singularity. an equilibrium is reached, a stable orbit. (or) they are flung apart, never to meet again, except by the most infinitesimal of probabilities. (or) they collide, and are destroyed.

Stephen Robins 13-May-04/6:04 AM
1) If my secretary had knockers I would not be on this website at all. I would be finding excuses to rub up against her by the photocopier. As my secretary is twice my age and has smaller boobs than me I therefore conclude that to spy would require a "microscope" rather than a "telescope". As I did not get a diploma in origami from Ken Hom's School of Paper Art, I can't make a microscope from the weighty tome that is the instruction manual on how to behave on this site. So to conclude my first assertation: you are a snot gobbling quendo of failure.

2) Postscripts should be designated as such with the inclusion of a P.S. You did not do this and you therefore fail again.

3) In point of fact you are actually exceedingly gay and therefore a gaymeter is not necessary to asess your gayness. I fail but win 2v1.







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