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Spring Cleaning (Free verse) by horus8

Let me empty out the garage, and reminisce. Let me empty out the closet, and make a list. Let me empty out the house, as promised... Then let me wrap my mouth around this cold barrel & paint.

INTRANSIT 9-May-04/4:18 PM
I hate to be picky but the lack of reason bugs me. Failed marriage? Death? Who would be around to watch?

Sorry.




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