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This Summers Ablaze (Triolet) by DeadtotheWorld

Playing in the courtyard on a summers ablaze Heat is scorching and it’s about to be raised Refreshed in water, But doesn’t last too long yet I’m not amazed; So we play on this summer ablaze For all the elder folks look at us as if were crazed Ice Cream man comes around, respected as if he were god, So naturally he will be praised; Now we play in the courtyard on this summer ablaze But the Heat is scorching and it’s still to be raised

horus8 9-May-04/3:54 PM
My advice, get out of Idaho before you're completely retarded.




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