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the awakened raven (work in progress!) (Free verse) by crwncka1
I tell of this inner raven, this inner demonic presence the raven is of course, famously quoted 'nevermore' I wont speak of that, but my inner raven has been awakened it has been awakened in from the darkest depth of my soul this black bird of mythological legend has forever awakened, forever staring with that red glare that has made me so aware so aware of my inner self, for it was this raven I tell of this raven that came from depths of nowhere out of the the darkest reach of my soul somewhere down there, in the ever dark void this black bird that folklore calls "evil" emerged and came forth as I tell of it came forth out of the darkest reaching shadows of my soul from the very inner core is where the raven lifted as the wind from the west sets you free, evermore! this black raven bird I only became aware of when the blackened night forever became no more when the shadows from it where lifted in the dawn light as light finally shined down from the heavens and this creature of mine I finally came into focus as the shadows where rising from my soul the shadows that stretched all the way down to the depth to the very depth of my core being and it was only then did these shadows give way when this black bird awakened in me from the very core from the very blackened abyss center of my soul and this raven of mine finally emerged and no longer is a burden to me never again known as the wicked black bird of agony for it is now just a black bird like any other wind from the west sets you free, evermore! the raven has been awakened! this black bird of shadows is forever gone as no longer will you cease to cause me grief as I now see clearly though your presence that red glare your eyes so ominously stare that your just a black bird just a black bird that has now emerged emerged from the depth of my soul the raven I tell you that i' am now aware as my sprit has brought you forth from the darkness and commands you to fly away bird of myth the wind from the west is calling you it picks you up, as your now flown away away from me, I say flown away from me, evermore!

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