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Tell me I suck (Free verse) by Blindproject217
This is for all the warm thoughtful comments I received.
Never a stranger to do the untried
Determined and Blank faced
I poured out my soul
Here, I thought could be a place to confide
With your snide remarks and interjections
With no point or purpose
You load and shoot me down
Just to see a rise in me, or a bitter reaction
So how is it, now that you have won
Is it all you wanted
Was this your point
Just for amusement just for fun
Ill tell you once, and never again, this is how it ends
You wont make me quit
You wont break me
So get all your angry comments for me ready to send
Please tell me how much this sucks, thank you.
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