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To You (Please Critique and comment) (Free verse) by TrulyUnique0642
When I close my eyes I see you. I think of you late at night, I dream about you when I am sleeping. Every time I see you, I want to tell you how I feel, I am at a loss for words I get so nervous. It scares me to think of you with someone else, with her. I remember what we had All I can do is cry, And think about how much I love you.

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