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Hated (Free verse) by Ninoy_Instigator
I can't believe it It has finally happened I am down in her mind I am an eyesore of a thought Did I do something wrong Did I do something rude Did I lose her respect Did I become boring Hatred is something Hard to spot Hatred is stronger, the Harder it is to spot They crucified Christ They assassinated Malcolm They executed Rizal They snuck a bullet into King Feelings dwell inside Feelings of hate get more discrete if the Feelings are really hateful. These are the Feelings that are dark and ugly indeed. Take what you want from this, and Take criticism wisely, I will Take your criticism, I can handle that Hate, but I can't Take it, having her hate me.

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