|
|
 |
Louisiana Lovers (Other) by wdallan
The boat glides through the mire and cat o' tails,
The girl paddles against her fathers pressing pleas.
A leak springs so she frantically bails,
Water seeps around her ankles and knees.
With fear and trepidation her boy waits,
He remembers his special lover's sweetness.
They have pledged to always be loving mates;
The bayou bubbles with muggy hotness.
She reflects on her father's urgent wishes:
"Please don't ruin your life with that con-man."
Her toes are bitten by little fishes,
As her love jumps in to save his woman.
The boat sinks to the bottom of the marsh,
The lovers with joy to Heaven will march.
Back to poem details
| xxx | 68.166.37.185 | 0 | June 21, 2005 3:51 PM PDT |
| Anonymous | 205.188.116.140 | 3 | September 8, 2004 3:37 PM PDT |
| Anonymous | 204.32.209.187 | 8 | October 28, 2003 11:28 PM PST |
| shwenatjadeflower | 68.12.149.5 | 7 | August 15, 2002 6:25 PM PDT |
| Anonymous | 66.157.54.52 | 8 | July 27, 2002 11:23 AM PDT |
| ==Doylum | 62.6.71.17 | 0 | July 20, 2002 10:02 AM PDT |
| Anonymous | 66.157.52.47 | 7 | July 13, 2002 8:12 AM PDT |
| Anonymous | 64.217.135.24 | 5 | July 11, 2002 9:23 AM PDT |
| Anonymous | 64.175.99.26 | 3 | July 10, 2002 7:24 AM PDT |
| Anonymous | 207.194.216.45 | 1 | July 8, 2002 5:32 AM PDT |
| Anonymous | 62.7.40.79 | 1 | June 2, 2002 1:43 AM PDT |
| lilli | 134.226.1.158 | 1 | May 23, 2002 6:06 AM PDT |
| hoopoe | 62.254.32.4 | 5 | May 19, 2002 6:02 AM PDT |
| Anonymous | 206.41.10.135 | 5 | May 17, 2002 1:09 PM PDT |
| Anonymous | 204.245.176.100 | 3 | May 17, 2002 12:50 PM PDT |
| Anonymous | 66.47.86.4 | 4 | May 13, 2002 6:47 AM PDT |
|
