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Untitled. (Free verse) by LucidRevelation
The rhythm of my breath beats in sync to the swirls of smoke that curl around your face. This makes me weak and needy I envy the smoke that curls around your face in the exact rhythm of my breath. Undisrupted and undecided.

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