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Bare Feet, Bear Feet, a Bare Feat, and a Bear Feat (Free verse) by Enkidu
A colder night than this has failed to reach my feet so I ponder only daybreak for a breath Running from those pilose paws Eager Bearly Stuttering Shivering things darting through me I walk this line au naturel A stark and buck venture Day Having run out my time now life lies Gasping in the frozen dawn Truly a sight to behold Juggling Bear and all On a unicyle Save me

Up the ladder: January
Down the ladder: Spoken word (draft)

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9448
Posted: April 26, 2004 6:44 AM PDT; Last modified: April 27, 2004 6:30 AM PDT
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[9] deleted user @ 68.66.196.168 | 26-Apr-04/7:37 AM | Reply
Funny! Then, a somber thought. Nicely done!
[7] richa @ 81.178.217.164 | 27-Apr-04/10:56 AM | Reply
Miss out has from the first line, it is just confusing.

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