Bare Feet, Bear Feet, a Bare Feat, and a Bear Feat

Member since 2004 · Posted 26 Apr 2004 · Edited 27 Apr 2004 · 2 comments

A colder night than this has failed to reach my feet so I ponder only daybreak for a breath Running from those pilose paws Eager Bearly Stuttering Shivering things darting through me I walk this line au naturel A stark and buck venture Day Having run out my time now life lies Gasping in the frozen dawn Truly a sight to behold Juggling Bear and all On a unicyle Save me

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[9] deleted user 26-Apr-04/7:37 AM Reply

Funny! Then, a somber thought. Nicely done!

[7] richa 27-Apr-04/10:56 AM Reply

Miss out has from the first line, it is just confusing.