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Bare Feet, Bear Feet, a Bare Feat, and a Bear Feat (Free verse) by Enkidu A colder night than this has failed to reach my feet so
I ponder only daybreak for a breath
Running from those pilose paws
Eager
Bearly
Stuttering
Shivering things darting through me
I walk this line au naturel
A stark and buck venture
Day
Having run out my time now life lies
Gasping in the frozen dawn
Truly a sight to behold
Juggling Bear and all
On a unicyle
Save me
Up the ladder:
Staring through you
Down the ladder:
My brainâs dialogue
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Posted: April 26, 2004 6:44 AM PDT; Last modified: April 27, 2004 6:30 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9205313 Overall Rank: 9496 Comments:
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26-Apr-04/7:37 AM
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Funny! Then, a somber thought. Nicely done!
Miss out has from the first line, it is just confusing.
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