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Chronic Depression (Ode) by Ice allow the words to flow
those in bottomless sorrow
those in loneliness deep
open your eyes from sleep
wallowing in bitterness
swimming in despair
waiting for happiness
flying around somewhere
but the morrow awaits us
sleep therefore we must
but night'll come again
cycle repeats, til we end
Up the ladder:
Forever Lasting
Down the ladder:
Echoes
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Posted: April 23, 2004 6:47 AM PDT; Last modified: April 23, 2004 6:47 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.846319 Overall Rank: 10616 Comments:
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23-Apr-04/11:18 AM
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Get over it! If this sorrowful wail helps, fine.
A good exercise - writing this stuff will help you to write the things people want to read.
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