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Chronic Depression (Ode) by Ice

allow the words to flow those in bottomless sorrow those in loneliness deep open your eyes from sleep wallowing in bitterness swimming in despair waiting for happiness flying around somewhere but the morrow awaits us sleep therefore we must but night'll come again cycle repeats, til we end

Shuushin 23-Apr-04/8:24 PM
A good exercise - writing this stuff will help you to write the things people want to read.




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