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Bleeding Hope (Free verse) by oftherealm
i discern there is truth in your face
though not sterling, perhaps nickel?
an object, you have become a touchstone
of beliefs and bad memories that work
together for good. i hold you firmly
in my left hand, there is no right here;
only judgments.. pieced together from
better days of aliveness - gummy-
logic that smells of fake leather,
semisweet chocolate, and .. what is that?!
dead fish. i go on eBay to search for
another bright magnifying bauble of fate
authentic, in case i should ever lose you.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5953
Posted: April 19, 2004 1:16 AM PDT; Last modified: April 19, 2004 1:16 AM PDT
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Suddenly, a rough, oafish hand grabbed his shoulder, and a voice bellowed "Quaerion!"
Quaerion whirled around, green eyes flashing, to face his oppressor -- an unutterably fat, blond-bearded man in a loincloth and a plumed helmet.
"Who dares speak the name of Quaerion?!" spoke Quaerion in a quiet, commanding voice that caused all who in the tavern who were still conscious to fall silent and gaze in his direction, wondering who the powerful yet quiet hooded stranger named Quaerion could be.
TO BE CONTINUED...
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