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Sinful Endeavor, Thank You (Free verse) by sonawrote
I enjoy so much pleasure from this pain I guess that's why you might think I'm insane but it feels so good Why's it a sin? to touch your hot body to clench you within to pull you near with your face in mine to run my hands slowly down your spine to grab you firmly by your waist to enjoy fully your smell, your taste to reach inside and pull it out the thing that we are all about instinct draws us in it's clear to desire the things we're taught to fear someday I'm hoping to find a place where you can be who you are and still show your face where there's no one ashamed or judged for what they do cause in reality the judgers have probably done it too and if you closed your eyes or saw the truth and ran it still doesn't change me or the woman that I am but I'm grateful my love for all you helped me see like the parts that were hidden that you pulled out of me and I have no regrets that I totally let go and let what I feel finally show!

Up the ladder: no name
Down the ladder: a days journey

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11574
Posted: April 14, 2004 8:29 PM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2004 8:29 PM PDT
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