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Sinful Endeavor, Thank You (Free verse) by sonawrote
I enjoy so much
pleasure from this pain
I guess that's why
you might think I'm insane
but it feels so good
Why's it a sin?
to touch your hot body
to clench you within
to pull you near
with your face in mine
to run my hands
slowly down your spine
to grab you firmly
by your waist
to enjoy fully
your smell, your taste
to reach inside
and pull it out
the thing that we
are all about
instinct draws us in
it's clear
to desire the things
we're taught to fear
someday I'm hoping
to find a place
where you can be who you are
and still show your face
where there's no one ashamed
or judged for what they do
cause in reality the judgers
have probably done it too
and if you closed your eyes
or saw the truth and ran
it still doesn't change me
or the woman that I am
but I'm grateful my love
for all you helped me see
like the parts that were hidden
that you pulled out of me
and I have no regrets
that I
totally let go
and let what I feel
finally show!
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Posted: April 14, 2004 8:29 PM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2004 8:29 PM PDT
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