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Free verse № 96829

in perspective

by That One

Member since 2004 · Posted 12 Apr 2004 · 2 comments

Snap i will running in circles~ Burn myself Decomposed in the end closed door closed windows Broken glass encompassing Guilt trip blame me. Sabotage. Cut for the sole purpose of serving you An endless waltz

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[7] richa 13-Apr-04/7:00 AM Reply
The capitalisation is odd.

The pace is what you seem to be going for, but it does seem a bit cobbled together.
[7] deleted user 13-Apr-04/8:34 AM Reply
A bit disjointed and unfocused it seems. Could do without the last line.