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in perspective (Free verse) by That One

Snap i will running in circles~ Burn myself Decomposed in the end closed door closed windows Broken glass encompassing Guilt trip blame me. Sabotage. Cut for the sole purpose of serving you An endless waltz

richa 13-Apr-04/7:00 AM
The capitalisation is odd.

The pace is what you seem to be going for, but it does seem a bit cobbled together.




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