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From the Top of Apartment Stairwells (Free verse) by embersandenvelopes Every thought of you condenses into Blue,
from the shades of your shirts to the
connection of intangibilities.
Like a soft oil blend it brushes across
the palette, reminding me of subtleties
that melt us from seperates
into one, as if there was ever much distinction
in the matters of attachments and heart.
Up the ladder:
what i thought i was thinking
Down the ladder:
thanksgiving
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Posted: March 28, 2004 11:09 PM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2004 11:09 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0238404 Overall Rank: 7421 Comments:
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deleted user @ 68.169.177.107
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29-Mar-04/9:56 AM
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Does not follow the title.
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embersandenvelopes @ 24.152.203.178
> deleted user
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5-Apr-04/12:33 AM
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The original title is actually (Every word I never said) From the Top of Apartment Stairwells
A tastey snippet - but needs more to be more.
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