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What I Am (Free verse) by no1sangelz23
Does anyone care?
Can anyone hear me?
Cuz if you do I donât feel u here.
Iâm all alone
With no one to confide in
Everyoneâs too busy, it seems,
To see how Iâve been
I feel so depressed
So lost and confused
My heart is in shambles
And my self-confidence is bruised
I feel as if
No one can see me
I want to have friends,
Oh. I wish they could see.
I want to feel love,
Just like in the books.
Unfortunately for me
Many base things on looks.
I feel angry
That I am condemned
To live a life
That has stemmed
From happiness to sadness
With no apparent end.
I just want everyone to see
That I need somebody
Even though many may think
That Iâm nobody.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11660
Posted: March 28, 2004 12:38 PM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2004 12:38 PM PST
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Run a mile.
Fly a kite.
Swim to Catalina Island.
But - Don't write poetry.