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What I Am (Free verse) by no1sangelz23
Does anyone care? Can anyone hear me? Cuz if you do I don’t feel u here. I’m all alone With no one to confide in Everyone’s too busy, it seems, To see how I’ve been I feel so depressed So lost and confused My heart is in shambles And my self-confidence is bruised I feel as if No one can see me I want to have friends, Oh. I wish they could see. I want to feel love, Just like in the books. Unfortunately for me Many base things on looks. I feel angry That I am condemned To live a life That has stemmed From happiness to sadness With no apparent end. I just want everyone to see That I need somebody Even though many may think That I’m nobody.

Up the ladder: Embrace
Down the ladder: Desperate Revival

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11681
Posted: March 28, 2004 12:38 PM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2004 12:38 PM PST
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[n/a] deleted user @ 68.169.177.107 | 28-Mar-04/2:20 PM | Reply
Friendly advice to a lot of lonely fifteen-year-olds.
Run a mile.
Fly a kite.
Swim to Catalina Island.
But - Don't write poetry.
[6] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 | 29-Mar-04/6:48 AM | Reply
Write - write your heart out.
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