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A Garden Wall (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
I.
She asks me to cut the grass,
She seems so connected to
Tulips and roses
And so offended by a few
Blades of green.
Elizabeth's garden is
Grown over with weeds--
But still she asks me
Not to tear a single stone down.
If for a few splashes of color
She wants me not to touch a thing,
I'll keep my hands to myself
And tend to the yard I keep.
Patches of clover,
A few stubby
Bits of Saint Augustine,
But mostly dirt.
I've seen graveyards greener
Than my yard
And jungles neater
Than Elizabeth's garden.
II.
I asked him to cut the grass,
A man so lazy
Should do more than
Chew on
Unlit cigarettes.
Bags don't mind being filled
By discarded grass
And I don't mind seeing them stacked
By the curb.
He insists on eyeing my garden's
Three-foot high wall
Seeing creepers and vines
Crawling up the side
Saying he can fix it up quick--
But there's so many bare patches
By the walk
I wonder how he can
Focus so soundly on
A simple garden wall
Meant to keep out
Rabbits, or at least,
The thought of rabbits.
But I don't grow carrots.
I grow tulips,
Roses,
And I don't mind
Being surprised
Finding flowers in
Tangles of grass,
Little discoveries
Among the weeds.
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Posted: March 27, 2004 9:58 AM PST; Last modified: March 27, 2004 9:58 AM PST
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