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mistaken in a glance (Free verse) by francis nor capule
sadly, i accept what fate has offered,
believing that love would always be true.
blindly i would trust you;
no questions, no restraints.
but doubt would forever follow my heart,
that you do feel the same way too.
like a silent inferno;
waiting, biding.
i wish you would take all my fears away,
that you would assure me.
no fallacies, no more lies;
truth, just the truth.
for you broke my heart,
shattered it into a million shards.
yet i still take this chance;
may i not be mistaken, in a glance.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.806824
Overall Rank: 1659
Posted: March 26, 2004 9:24 AM PST; Last modified: March 26, 2004 2:38 PM PST
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