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mistaken in a glance

by francis nor capule

Member since 2004 · Posted 26 Mar 2004 · Edited 26 Mar 2004 · 2 comments

sadly, i accept what fate has offered, believing that love would always be true. blindly i would trust you; no questions, no restraints. but doubt would forever follow my heart, that you do feel the same way too. like a silent inferno; waiting, biding. i wish you would take all my fears away, that you would assure me. no fallacies, no more lies; truth, just the truth. for you broke my heart, shattered it into a million shards. yet i still take this chance; may i not be mistaken, in a glance.

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[7] Shuushin 26-Mar-04/3:14 PM Reply
yap. A break-up poem.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 26-Mar-04/5:22 PM Reply
A gentleman's prune. -10-