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mistaken in a glance (Free verse) by francis nor capule
sadly, i accept what fate has offered, believing that love would always be true. blindly i would trust you; no questions, no restraints. but doubt would forever follow my heart, that you do feel the same way too. like a silent inferno; waiting, biding. i wish you would take all my fears away, that you would assure me. no fallacies, no more lies; truth, just the truth. for you broke my heart, shattered it into a million shards. yet i still take this chance; may i not be mistaken, in a glance.

Up the ladder: Mentor
Down the ladder: A Truth About Mortals

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.806824
Overall Rank: 1659
Posted: March 26, 2004 9:24 AM PST; Last modified: March 26, 2004 2:38 PM PST
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[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 26-Mar-04/3:14 PM | Reply
yap. A break-up poem.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 26-Mar-04/5:22 PM | Reply
A gentleman's prune. -10-
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