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bunny (Free verse) by the indign
i followed a bunny rabbit
he didn't have a time piece, but he did have a big pair of scissors
he seemed like he was in a hurry but not
he hopped and hopped, then stopped and stopped
and hopped back to where he'd been then back again
and he fell down sometimes too
at one point he almost lost me
he went under a bush and it had lots of thorns
i was about to go away, but he came back out, out the other side
then he hopped into a puddle and got me all wet
more water splashed than was in the puddle, so i was confused
but before i could ponder he hopped off again
i had to run to keep up
he was going really fast
but i caught up and he stopped and stared at the sunset
it was really pretty
the bunny watching the sunset
but i got excited and drop kicked him
oh well
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.625
Weighted score: 5.7059712
Overall Rank: 1940
Posted: March 24, 2004 7:54 PM PST; Last modified: March 24, 2004 7:54 PM PST
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Start from the drop kick and go from there.