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bunny (Free verse) by the indign
i followed a bunny rabbit he didn't have a time piece, but he did have a big pair of scissors he seemed like he was in a hurry but not he hopped and hopped, then stopped and stopped and hopped back to where he'd been then back again and he fell down sometimes too at one point he almost lost me he went under a bush and it had lots of thorns i was about to go away, but he came back out, out the other side then he hopped into a puddle and got me all wet more water splashed than was in the puddle, so i was confused but before i could ponder he hopped off again i had to run to keep up he was going really fast but i caught up and he stopped and stared at the sunset it was really pretty the bunny watching the sunset but i got excited and drop kicked him oh well


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Arithmetic Mean: 7.625
Weighted score: 5.7059712
Overall Rank: 1932
Posted: March 24, 2004 7:54 PM PST; Last modified: March 24, 2004 7:54 PM PST
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[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 25-Mar-04/6:48 AM | Reply
... something one might use to warm up to start writing a poem.

Start from the drop kick and go from there.
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