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A Walk Along The Lonely Shore (Free verse) by Sam
A walk along the lonely shore
With thousands words running through my mind
The heart fell silent as though abhorred
In search of happiness that it could not find
The glimmer of the moon reflects the sea
A tranquil moment of a strained ambiguity
Would the night be a friend or a foe?
Would it calm down or would just explode
The dream clenched fast in a vision of the light
With a hand held in the stillness of this night,
But now the dawn reverb all but an eerie sound
Of the heartbeat all about to get confound.
It echoed in silence the uncertain words
One that could torment a battered soul.
Dreamer dream on; dreamer dream no more
Lover love as much; Lover learn to let go.
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Posted: March 23, 2004 8:53 PM PST; Last modified: March 23, 2004 8:53 PM PST
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the moon reflects the sea (?)
Would it calm down or would just explode
that stuff is, ah - ungood.