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Thinking (Other) by Tiffany Her mother sat in the chair
As she stroked her har.
Thinking harder than sheâd ever seen
Even harder than sheâs cleaned.
Wondering what she was thinking
Her motherâs mind was sinking.
Sinking into deep thought
About the love she hadnât bought.
About the love she has for her girl.
Up the ladder:
The Bed
Down the ladder:
With Old Light
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Posted: March 23, 2004 3:00 PM PST; Last modified: March 23, 2004 3:00 PM PSTWeighted score: 6.5555553 Overall Rank: 639 Comments:
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Katzclear @ 12.222.55.183
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23-Mar-04/3:09 PM
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it's got a good foundation, but I got a little lost.
i liked it. Is "har" supposed to be "hair"? - 10
liar.
this honestly could've been written by a fourth grader.
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