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Thinking

Member since 2004 · Posted 23 Mar 2004 · 4 comments

Her mother sat in the chair As she stroked her har. Thinking harder than sheâd ever seen Even harder than sheâs cleaned. Wondering what she was thinking Her motherâs mind was sinking. Sinking into deep thought About the love she hadnât bought. About the love she has for her girl.

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[8] Katzclear 23-Mar-04/3:09 PM Reply

it's got a good foundation, but I got a little lost.

[1] deleted user 28-Mar-04/4:24 PM Reply

i liked it. Is "har" supposed to be "hair"? - 10

[n/a] richa › deleted user 2-Jun-07/3:43 PM Reply

liar.

[1] dclark 1-Jun-07/3:28 PM Reply

this honestly could've been written by a fourth grader.