poemranker ::Zin by caffrey

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Haiku № 94711

Zin

Member since 2004 · Posted 22 Mar 2004 · 1 comment

swallowing sunshine in reverse tasting her rays wine to grape to vine

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[6] Shuushin 22-Mar-04/7:30 PM Reply
no. Sorry. Too much poetry, not enough profundity.