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Zin (Haiku) by caffrey swallowing sunshine
in reverse tasting her rays
wine to grape to vine
Up the ladder:
Because of me
Down the ladder:
No wonder I can't sleep when you are gone, but still here.
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Posted: March 22, 2004 3:23 PM PST; Last modified: March 22, 2004 3:23 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8013287 Overall Rank: 11131 Comments:
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Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177
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22-Mar-04/7:30 PM
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no. Sorry. Too much poetry, not enough profundity.
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