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i miss you (Free verse) by PhSbLoNdE569
life gets hard, but u can always fix that
when i see yur face i know i want to be a part of that
yur beautiful smile, with eyes i can drown in forever
i just wish more could happen that i could get to know you better
i know you can give me all that i desire
its located in your heart, burning mine like a fire
it rushes through your veins like a raging lightning bolt
you hold me in your arms, until the heat gets cold
you let go of my heart, and drop it to the ground
as i stand here crying, i just lost the best thing i had found
you were the greatest thing that has ever happened in my eyes
and now i mourn that loss, i know it eventually would die
you know that now i miss you, as if you had been mine forever
ill try and move on, although it will b hard, but know ill nevr turn
back 2 you...NEVER
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4545455
Weighted score: 5.7272725
Overall Rank: 1870
Posted: March 14, 2004 5:04 PM PST; Last modified: March 14, 2004 5:04 PM PST
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