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i miss you (Free verse) by PhSbLoNdE569
life gets hard, but u can always fix that when i see yur face i know i want to be a part of that yur beautiful smile, with eyes i can drown in forever i just wish more could happen that i could get to know you better i know you can give me all that i desire its located in your heart, burning mine like a fire it rushes through your veins like a raging lightning bolt you hold me in your arms, until the heat gets cold you let go of my heart, and drop it to the ground as i stand here crying, i just lost the best thing i had found you were the greatest thing that has ever happened in my eyes and now i mourn that loss, i know it eventually would die you know that now i miss you, as if you had been mine forever ill try and move on, although it will b hard, but know ill nevr turn back 2 you...NEVER

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4545455
Weighted score: 5.7272725
Overall Rank: 1870
Posted: March 14, 2004 5:04 PM PST; Last modified: March 14, 2004 5:04 PM PST
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