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Transition

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Dec 2004 · 2 comments

(Chorus) I’m not sure where it’s gonna lead I’m not sure if she loves me Damn society for distorted views Only need a wanting heart from you No, no, I never like this before I just threw them off Always been this cold Fuck these people Who cares about another being? They never been in situation so steeper If they did then they’d understand Where my judgment is coming from For it’s not better to land With your own two feet So grow another pair What the fuck should I care? I’m not having another defeat (Chorus) Who’s that singing in the back? Caring about the heart Hopes he gets another attack Dumbasses think with feeling Can they feel the blood in their mouth? More like taste with the HIV feeding I have been so blind And been taken advantage of There’s no way I’m being kind Don’t ask where the real and pure For that it went out when the door opened A winter without a useful cure (Chorus) Die lovingness die Die like the sluts you are

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[2] Lifeboatman 27-Dec-04/3:59 AM Reply
too... uhm... ahh... let's just say no grace... 2
[5] Dovina 27-Dec-04/2:37 PM Reply
Better grammar would help I think, even for a song. This is not simply a matter of an old prude telling a young songwriter about grammatical orderliness, it is a matter of clarity.